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ik nazam CA key liye - chintoo - 10-25-2004
hi salam sathio aik punjaby nazam CA key liye
apney ser di wail karai terey laye
sooli utey jaan cherhaii terey laye
terey kolon ghut nahi sarya pani da
asan tey lahoody nehar wagaii terey laye
cherdey lahndey tera na apraia mey
kerda kini hoor kamai terey laye
ajey we tenoon shaq ay merey amlaan tey
doostann utey choory chalay terey laye
kitaban utey sajdah ker key tenoon mey
apni sooli app uthaii terey laye
terey werga koi nahi nal zamanedey
CA sar dy sharat lagay terey laye
sathio iss section mey achy achy poems likh ker bejhey specially khud likhi hoi
ur inshalaa mey assey ur bhy nazmye pesh kerta rahoon ga
m.farrukh
- chintoo - 10-28-2004
ICAP DI TELWAAAAAAAAAAAR
SADEY KAKH UDA DEY WEYGI ICAP DY TELWAAAAAR
SANOOON RUB BHOLLA DEY WEYGI ICAP DY TELWAR
QABRAN KADHAN WALEY APNA DHANDHA SOCHAN HOOR
SAAADY QABAR BANA DEY WEYGI ICAP DY TELWAAAR
AKKH REHAA SI BHANGRA PANDA RATEIIN IZRAAEL
MEA BHAAR GHATA DEY WEYGI ICAP DI TELWAAAAR
TUTI WEKH KANALI WEHREY HOYA PAK YAQEENEEEEN
MEENOON ZEHAR KHAWA DEY WEY GI ICAP DI TELWAAR
MFC JHEREEY KIDHREY KERDEY PAYYNEY SHOOOOOOR
CHEYHTY CHUP KARA DEY WEY GY ICAP DY TELWAAR
DEAR FELLOWS I SEE THT REGULARY ALMOST TEN MEMBERS READ MY POEM BUT NO ONE REPLY ON IT .IF ANY ONE NOT UNDERSTAND ANY SENTENCE CONTACT WITH ME ON THIS FORUM I WILL TRANSLATE IT
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Edited by - chintoo on Oct 28 2004 13938 PM
- Huma - 10-28-2004
Dear Farrukh..
I just read ur both poems,, i understood the first one,, but had problems getting the second.. what is talweer.. or whatever that is written.. and plz a quick summary will be appriciated..
Otherwise,, ncie poems u write,, lagta ahy shairi main naya naya qadam rakha hay,, and CA ki jan ko rona bhi )
Regards
HUMA
- chintoo - 10-28-2004
HI
SALAM
RHNX FOR REPLY HUMAAAAAAAAA
I DONT KNOW WHAT I CALL U BUT FORGET IT AND SORRY FOR CALLING U DIRECTLLY HUMA
U MENTIONED A WORD TELWAAR ITS A SWORD THIS AND U R RIGHT THT I M A NEWLY BORN POET AND ALL THESE ARE WROTE BY ME 3 MONTHS AGO I HAV LOT OF MORE WHICH I PRESENT HERE IF I GOT MORE APPRECIATION FROM FELLOWS .
AND ALL THESE ARE FOR A MUSHAIRA HELD IN OUR COLLEGE 2 MONTHS AGO AND SPECAILLY SAID BY MY FAVOURATE TEACHER SIR HABIB TO WRITE ON THIS TOPIC
m.farrukh
- Huma - 10-28-2004
Hi Farrukh
No worries, call me whatver u like,, ROSE KO KISI BHI NAAM SAY PUKARO WOH ROSE HI RAHAY GA ).. you can call me appi, baji, huma,,.. and plz a quick summary of ur poems too,, as not everything is understadnable in ur poems..
and keep up the good work,, do post more poems,, i love poetry,, ab jo aap likhtay hoo agar us ko bhi poetry kah saktay hain toooooooooooooo... kidding
take care
huma
- Pracs - 10-29-2004
Good work yaar,.. continue with u r poems...
btw i gather u r just a starter in the profession, since u mention 'college' why so much 'negative' in u r poems.... or is it 'dard' a basic ingredients for all poets...
"Allah does not change the state of people unless they change what is within themselves" Quran 1311
- noman - 10-29-2004
aha ha ha...kya baat a
ZABARDAST....laggey raho.....
per punjabi spelling dey vich zara improvment di zaroorat hai...
pehli waari parh k sahi samajh nai lagdi...per sher top de c.
is tarah...just sugestion
saaday kakh udaa daywegi icap di talwaar
saanu rab bhula daywegi icap di talwaar
yaar tu cheeta lagga !!
Edited by - noman on Oct 28 2004 113339 PM
- Azeem Shah Khan - 10-29-2004
i wish i could understand punjabi
azeem
- chintoo - 10-29-2004
hi
salam
first of all thanxto all of u to appreciate my poems and
huma one thing is thtkey rose key sath kantey bhy hootey hein jo mujhey lagey hein
and for nomaan i know key yaar merey spelling mistake hooty hey kher i try my best and the new one is
this one is mixture of clearance certificate and icap
clearance certificate<cc> is required from college where u studied for taking exams in icap
ucha kinj na kerey boll cc da
icap gal wich paya dhool cc da
cc tenho kedhy we labhni nahi
jinha merzy phool seeena kitaba da
ban jandey ney mamey akey dherey we
sakht cretaria jinha cc da
wich medaney akey teqna howey tey
skans wech wajda dhool cc da
sadian teker tery koollon muqna nahi
eena sayapa cc da
ca kern laga tu sangya nahi
mfc paal liya ee roog cc da
m.farrukh
- Huma - 10-29-2004
poor chinto....
sorry agar aap ko meray kantay chubh gaye,, a sincere advice is that next time door say baat karna.. )
keep it up...
regards
huma
- ali4u3 - 10-29-2004
nice .....
liken mai sirf read ker sakta hoo.....likh nahi sakta kuch bcz i m not a poet
nywayz farukh...(Y)
yeh sabb ICAP ki e-mail per bhi send kia kar yarr
Never seek advice from a Chartered Accountant. They are trained to find problems not solutions.
- noman - 10-30-2004
yaar..chintoo (candy)<img src=icon_smile_tongue.gif border=0 align=middle>
the latest one was not that good!
the second misra not equal in length or weight....
try adding some words to the second lines.....
you see u get critical analysis here<img src=icon_smile_cool.gif border=0 align=middle>
- chintoo - 10-30-2004
hi
salam
soory to huma tht she mind tht.
and now i have a poem on america and pakistani govt
her tasveeer america dy
mey jageer america dy
sindh punjab america dy
balu pathan america dy
khulam khulla kinj phiraan
galll zanjeer america dy
miti ker key chada ga
her tedbeer america dy
i hope key appp ku pasand ayy gy
or sorry to all of u agar kissi ko mujh sey koi nuqsaan poonhcha hoo ur bura lagy hoo mery baat
speciallly huma tu kuch ziada hy tease lag raheen hey
ok
m.farrukh
- chintoo - 10-30-2004
hi
salam
soory to huma tht she mind tht.
and now i have a poem on america and pakistani govt
her tasveeer america dy
mey jageer america dy
sindh punjab america dy
balu pathan america dy
khulam khulla kinj phiraan
galll zanjeer america dy
miti ker key chada ga
her tedbeer america dy
i hope key appp ku pasand ayy gy
or sorry to all of u agar kissi ko mujh sey koi nuqsaan poonhcha hoo ur bura lagy hoo mery baat
speciallly huma tu kuch ziada hy tease lag raheen hey
ok
m.farrukh
- Huma - 10-30-2004
no chinto,,,.. i do not mind anything at all,, i do not know what gave u that impression.. as i am here just for enjoyment,, and i do not take things personally.. i guess no need of further excuses,, and explanations,,