07-19-2007, 06:16 PM
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<br />Few months after Marriage
Abhi shaadi ka pehla hi saal tha,
Khushi ke maare mera bura haal tha,
Khushiyaan kuchh yun umad rahin thi,
Ki sambhale nahi sambhal rahi thi..
Subah subah madam ka chai le kar aana
Thoda sharmate huye humein neend se jagana,
Wo pyaar bhara hath hamare baalon mein phirana,
Muskurate huye kehna ki..
Darling chai to pi lo, Jaldi se ready ho jao, Aap ko office bhi hai jaana.
Gharwali bhagwan ka roop le kar aayee thi,
Dil aur dimag par poori tarah chhayee thi,
Saans bhi lete they to naam usee ka hota tha,
Ik pal bhi door jeena dushwar hota tha..
5 saal baad........
Subah subah madam ka chai le kar aana,
Table par rakh kar jor se chillana,
Aaj office jao to munna ko
School ****te hue jana...
Suno ek baar phir wohi awaaj aayi,
Kya baat hai abhi tak chhodi nahi charpayee,
Agar munna late ho gaya to dekh lena,
Munna ki teachers ko phir khud hi sambhaal lena..
Na jane gharwali kaisa roop le kar aayi thi,
Dil aur dimaag par kaali ghata chhayee thi,
Saans bhi lete hain to unhi ka khayal hota hai,
Ab har samay jehan mein ek hi sawal hota hai..
Kya kabhi woh din laut ke aayenge,
Hum ek baar phir kunwaare Ho jaayenge.... ...!
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I dont know i should laugh or cry [D] [(] . Because there is a comedy and tragedy both in your poem. Most tragic sentence is the last one. HOw mean you men are [})] . Waise this is sir a sir ziyadathi. Man should understand his wife's responisbility. After kids wives hardly get time to do all those things (naaz, nakhray, laad, piyaar, sohla singhaar etc) as you mentioned in first half. Yea if husband wants her exactly as she was soon after marriage then i think they should not plan for kids. Bachay nahin hon ge tou wife waisee hi rahay gi jaise pehlay thi [)]. aur agar bachay chahiye tou he should not long to be a Kanwara again but compromise with the situation.
<br />Few months after Marriage
Abhi shaadi ka pehla hi saal tha,
Khushi ke maare mera bura haal tha,
Khushiyaan kuchh yun umad rahin thi,
Ki sambhale nahi sambhal rahi thi..
Subah subah madam ka chai le kar aana
Thoda sharmate huye humein neend se jagana,
Wo pyaar bhara hath hamare baalon mein phirana,
Muskurate huye kehna ki..
Darling chai to pi lo, Jaldi se ready ho jao, Aap ko office bhi hai jaana.
Gharwali bhagwan ka roop le kar aayee thi,
Dil aur dimag par poori tarah chhayee thi,
Saans bhi lete they to naam usee ka hota tha,
Ik pal bhi door jeena dushwar hota tha..
5 saal baad........
Subah subah madam ka chai le kar aana,
Table par rakh kar jor se chillana,
Aaj office jao to munna ko
School ****te hue jana...
Suno ek baar phir wohi awaaj aayi,
Kya baat hai abhi tak chhodi nahi charpayee,
Agar munna late ho gaya to dekh lena,
Munna ki teachers ko phir khud hi sambhaal lena..
Na jane gharwali kaisa roop le kar aayi thi,
Dil aur dimaag par kaali ghata chhayee thi,
Saans bhi lete hain to unhi ka khayal hota hai,
Ab har samay jehan mein ek hi sawal hota hai..
Kya kabhi woh din laut ke aayenge,
Hum ek baar phir kunwaare Ho jaayenge.... ...!
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I dont know i should laugh or cry [D] [(] . Because there is a comedy and tragedy both in your poem. Most tragic sentence is the last one. HOw mean you men are [})] . Waise this is sir a sir ziyadathi. Man should understand his wife's responisbility. After kids wives hardly get time to do all those things (naaz, nakhray, laad, piyaar, sohla singhaar etc) as you mentioned in first half. Yea if husband wants her exactly as she was soon after marriage then i think they should not plan for kids. Bachay nahin hon ge tou wife waisee hi rahay gi jaise pehlay thi [)]. aur agar bachay chahiye tou he should not long to be a Kanwara again but compromise with the situation.
