Lets be poet

[raza 123]

Uss Addve Jaan Ko Raza Mein Bura Kese Kahun,
Jab Bhi Aya Samne Woh Bevafa Acha Laga ...

[Namia Beera]

raza..... tumhara shair achaa hai...

[Namia Beera]

@ Yasir bhai...
pataa nahi kaisi likhti hu... bus likhti hu... ek do logo ko send karti hu iss shart k sath k agey koi naa fwd karey and del kar deti hu... [)]
un sub ko tho achi lagti hai... jaha koi ghalti karu to bta deti hein...

[WARDAH]

namia.... ye raza ka shair ni hai usny bichary shair ka naam hta k apna lga lia hai.v bad razaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

[raza 123]

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<br />namia.... ye raza ka shair ni hai usny bichary shair ka naam hta k apna lga lia hai.v bad razaaaaaaaaaaaaa.
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@ wardah tum samjdar hu hahahahaha PP[8D]

[WARDAH]

tum bhi smjhdaar ho jao ab....dosron k shairon py apna naam lga k bteesi na nikalo p

[raza 123]

<blockquote id="quote"><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, san" id="quote">quote<hr height="1" noshade id="quote"><i>Originally posted by WARDAH</i>
<br />tum bhi smjhdaar ho jao ab....dosron k shairon py apna naam lga k bteesi na nikalo p
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hahahah -) yehe tu humari batein hein.

[yasir_live]

<font size="1"><blockquote id="quote"><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, san" id="quote">quote<hr height="1" noshade id="quote"><i>Originally posted by Namia Beera</i>
<br />@ Yasir bhai...
pataa nahi kaisi likhti hu... bus likhti hu... ek do logo ko send karti hu iss shart k sath k agey koi naa fwd karey and del kar deti hu... [)]
un sub ko tho achi lagti hai... jaha koi ghalti karu to bta deti hein...
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Ho sakta hay Wo Ek do log bhi Tumhaari tarah k hi hon [D] iss liay unhain pasand ajati ho [p]. Chalo Tum iss baar Mujhay send karna Email k through then main parhh kar kuch rai dunga.

Lakin Pichkana Type ki naa ho, Bohat Gehrri aur Mature wordings wali shairi honi chaiyay.

Regards.

[Namia Beera]

ok wardah bj... i will Inshallah...
yasir bhai apka to account he nhi pata to ap ko kaise send karu [P]

[yasir_live]

Namia.

Ahan, Dear Ek Send Email ka option hota hay Iss forum per, uss k zariyay bhej dena ok.

Regards.

[Kasim]

<b>Main gum thay soachnay main</b>

kuch kiyaal thay kuch sawal thay
kabhi wabal thay kabhi mahal thay

kuch khawab thay kuch hajaab thay
kabhi saraab thay kabhi azaab thay

kuch addain thi kuch saddain thi
kabhi jaffain thi kabhi khattain thi

ik rishta tha Kuch ajeeb sa
dil k tha kuch kareeb sa
kabhi apna tha
kabhi sapna tha

<b>Phir yoon howa main nay soach liyeah</b>

Appni khatta jaan lii main nay
Appni saza maan lii main nay

woe joe apna sa tha
ousay chore diyeah
woe joe sapna sa tha
ousay tore diyeah

Rab say yeah dawa ki
Dil say yeah iltija ki

woe jissay chahay ousay paaye
zindaghi main her pal muskuraay

haan kabhi chand joe angan main aayee
aik pal ko ousay yaad tu aayee

kabhi woe kissi ka apna sa tha
kabhi woe kissi ka sapna sa tha

regards

[Kasim]

As mentioned in initial post of this topic

"CA walay Ranjeeda/Sanjeeda and Paycheeda hotay hain "

anyway
apnay hissay ki ranjeeda poetry main ker chuka abb mazeed na hoti hay na kerni hay
haan sanjeeda and paycheeda per koi pabandi nahi hay
so app log tiyaar rahain in k liyeah

regards

[ciapk]

Wa kasim tu waqai shair ho gia bhai khairiat tu hay -) yay tu himat harnay wali poetry or kasim ki zubani? strange

[Anamz1]

But according to kasim us ny himat nahe hari, kurbani di hai.[)] It seems me. Else kasim know Obviously. [D]

[Kasim]

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<br />Wa kasim tu waqai shair ho gia bhai khairiat tu hay -) yay tu himat harnay wali poetry or kasim ki zubani? strange
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baray afsooos ki baat hay ciapk
main ratooon ko jaag jaag ker nazmain sochta raha hoon and app abb keh rahay hoo k kasim tu waqai shair hogaya

bohat dukh howa yeah jaan k

and by the way

to win by losing some one is better then to lose the person by winning him/her

hope so app ko samjh nahi ayegi
mijhay khud nahi aye abhi tak lol
halan k meri zatti qoutation hay lol again