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10-30-2004, 10:36 AM

yaar..chintoo (candy)<img src=icon_smile_tongue.gif border=0 align=middle>

the latest one was not that good!
the second misra not equal in length or weight....
try adding some words to the second lines.....

you see u get critical analysis here<img src=icon_smile_cool.gif border=0 align=middle>

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ik nazam CA key liye - by chintoo - 10-25-2004, 06:41 PM

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