Lets be poet

[Kasim]

CA walay kafi sanjeeda/ranjeeda/paycheeda mashoor hain lol and aam tour per ba-addab tu hotay hain (majboori hay kia karain lol) but addab say kam he lagaooo hota hay innay tu kiyoun na ham log addab ki duniya main CA waloon ka naam roshan kernay ki kuch kushsih karain shayed k kal ko market main kissi shairi k kalaaam per iss kisam ka bhi koi naam hoo

Jaffar Hussain DARWAISH FCA
Salahud din PERWANA ACA
Yasir Riaz UDASS FCA
Kamran KAMI BHAI ACA
Asma SENSIBLE ACA
Cipk MUNDA SHARARTI ACA
Kasim JANGJU ACA

LOL

Well doing so u may or may not care about kafiya,radeef, wazaan etc of shair in shorts no rules but decency is must only

long ago i had some interest in poetry was used to try to write then though i still know i was never good in that then or even now
but kia karain app sub say dosti hay tu app sub ko bardasht tu kerna paray ga na lol
my initial contributions are from few of my that time drafting (even i cant say its poetry lol)

<b>Tum nay meray liyeah kia kia </b>

Woe joe apna hoo per ik sapna hoo
App us k yar hoo woe apka piyar hoo

Woe sang hoo tu zindagi main rang hoo
Woe muskaray tu jewan gungunay

Kabhi woe kehday batoon main
Tum nay meray liyeah kia kia

soach yeah sang hogi apki ratton main
Main nay ous k liyeah kia kia

Jiss ko sub kuch jana apna
Ous nay he na mana apna

jiss say main nay piyar kia
Ous nay mijh say biyopar kia

Aisay main dil ko behlain kia
Aisay main khud ko samjhain kia

K woe tu apna hay per ik sapna hay



<b>main he teray dil main basta tha</b>

Tu hay us ki chah main
Main hon teri rah main

Woe manzil hay kissi or ki
Tu manzil hay kissi or ki

Woe teray dil main basta hay
Tu meray dil pay hasta hay

Tu shayad ousi ki ho jaye ik din
Sang ous k kahin kho jaye ik din

Per mijh ko bhool na payegi
jab raat angan main chayegi

jab chand asman per ayega
daikh k tujh ko muskaray ga
wada tera ik yaad dilyeah ga

chand ko daikh ker muskaranay ka
hasi main gham ko chupanay ka

tub tu yeah jaan jayegi
tub tu yeah maan jayegi

main he teray dil main basta tha
main he teray dil main basta tha


<b>Apnay kiyeah pay pashtain kia</b>

Apnay kiyeah pay pashtain kia
Honi tu horahi abb ghabrain kia

Khita apni ho tu kissi say kia shikwa
Khud he say rothain khud ko munain kia

Woe bawafa tha mager tha kiss or ka
Kitna tha ous ko chaha abh jitlain kia

Dard intaha ka hay or zabt ghazab ka
Na ho jab koi maseeha tu batlain kia


ur turn now plz

[ciapk]

wawawawawawawaw, maza aa gia hahahahahahhaahhhhaahahah lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz -)

Main apni nai bna raha Meera ki poetry hay you tube pay sun lain.

Manzil mazil sy pochti hay manzil kahan hay manzil nay manzil ko kaha k manzil nahi mili tu manzial sy manzil sy kaha ka manzial nay manzil ko dhonda khaan hay -) lolzzzzzzzzzzz

[WARDAH]

hahahahhhahahahahhahohohohohehehehehe ye kia nya tmasha lga dia hai.
kasim tmam tangain torny k bawajod jis dil sy tum ny likhi hi poetry us py bohat achi koshsh hai.kuch ashaar waqai wzn dar or mani khaiz hain. but baqi to . . . .khair choro keep it up!! or bhi share kro i know is bhi boht behter poetry ki hogi tum ny [)]

[WARDAH]

last ki do ziada achi hain )
ciapk. . .kia chawl mari hai dear!! wah wah!!

[Kasim]

apni khata ki saza paoonga
main khud ko tamasha banaoonga

khoya tujhay tu khoya kuch nahi
main hans k hosh apnay gawaoonga

tu na mila na mila khuda he
main khud rab say milnay jaoonga

yeah ishq hay koi khail nahi bachon ka
martay dam bhi yeahi tujhay samjhaoonga

mar k bhi sath nahi choronga tera
apnay kutbay per tera naam likhwaoonga (LOL for this one)



koi or poet nahi hay yahan kia ?

[WARDAH]

hahahahaha tum baaz nahin ao gy to be continue
jaib na daikho,dil daikho maira
tumko udhary ki qulfi khilwaonga

sensible k bhai chahy chitrol hi krain
mai phir bhi us sy milny jaon ga

tu gosht mai chahy daly na daly
mai phir bhi bazaar sy kaddu laon ga [p] hahahehehhhohoho

[ciapk]

Yay main nay nai mari thi main ny btaya tu hay ka MEERA ki chawal hay youtube py daikhain MEERA poetry. -)

[WARDAH]

as per topic my own (hai na kasim ???)
majmooah a tazaad hai hasti mairi
hajoom e insaan hay or virran basti mairi
samundar hai pur sakon sahil hai ro baro
or beech bhanwar hai kashti mairi

[Kasim]

wardah yea kiss ki poetry hay
tum ki tu nahi lagti lol

anyway jiss kissi ki bhi hay

abb tu main nay perh lee hay
so kuch tarameeem zaroor tajweez karoon ga lol kitni acchi urdu hay meri

anyway dear it may be better like this


main hoon or majmooah a tizaad hay hasti meri
hajoom a insaaan hay or viraan basti meri

samunder hay pur sakoon sahil hay ro baroo
beech bhanwar hay or parayshaan kasti meri


lol


next time apni ya kissi ki chori ki hoei poetry appnay naam say pot kaoo tu
aik dafa haam jaisay ustaad say check zaroor kerwa liyah karooo madam kadduuuu jee

regards

[WARDAH]

insaaf badshah slamt insaaf. . .koi hai jo a k btae bhla mairy ashaar behtr hain ya jo kasim qafia waly ki trmeem shuda shairi ???????????

[ciapk]

Yay badshah salamt kon hain? -)

[Kasim]

ciapk chalooo abb app badshah ban jaooo
and insaaf kar k bataooo k peotry kiss ki acchi hay

joe wardah nay kahin say chori ki hay woe wali
ya
joe us ki chori shuda poetry ko main nay edit kia hay woe wali
(waisay iss terha say poetry meri ban gaye na lol)


but plz insaaf k takazooon ko malhuaz-a-khatir rakhna (lol)

and gender discremination ki base per decision mat kerna

i meant k case sensitive <b>(larkiyaan aksar jahan zaroorat paray khud ko case seneitive kehti hain and iss lihaaz say favour bhi mangti and jahan zaroorat paray equality k daway kerti hain and ous lihaaz say rights mangti hain iss per bhi topic rakhoonga kuch dinno main lol)</b> ko consider mat kerna

so badshah salamat lets see what u decide
over to u dear

regards

[WARDAH]

g ni u took wrong meaning of case sensitive.that doesnt mean sinf-e-nazuk . . . that meant k baat baat ka ferk hota hai.her baat aik hi laathi sy nahin hanki jati.gr aik baat nihayt personal ho us mai or general baat mai ferk hota hai,to dono k baray mai kuch bhi kehny say pehly us baat ki nzakat ko nzr mai rkh k bolna chchye. . .i hope now u understand the meaning of case sensitive.its about case not girl.

[Kasim]

case sensitive per baaad main tafseel say baat karain gay jab topic doonga
abhi baat mat badlooo
let the king (sing is king) give his decision

[WARDAH]

I just cleared the meaning behind the word case sensitive. . .ta k tum uska matlb sinf-e-nazuk hi na laity raho or mujh nazuk ko hit krty rho [p]