POETRY??

[ophie]

okey sajjad dar .... here is one of my own

Manzilon se koi gila nahin hei
safar ka hum mein hosla nahin hei

phir us se mujhe yaad a azaab mila
wo jo ik umer se mila nahin hei

sang bari bhi abhi jaari hei
girebaan bhi abhi sila nahin hei


well believe it or not ...... but it is my own created stuff so .... tell me how's that mates ..... ????what do you think huma bibi ... you are dealing with a bunch of professionals here

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[sajjad_dar2000]

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okey sajjad dar .... here is one of my own
well believe it or not ...... but it is my own created stuff so


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Cant believe this, if its true than u r so good in poetry……………..and who is huma bibi yaar…….Miaraa b introduction karwahoo na plzz.

Ok ophie its again my own written stuff,

KHUD-KASHI KO NIKLAA MAI TUNG AA KAR
KHUBAR JUB UN KO MILEE SUB CHOOR KAR A-HAY

WADAY MOTABAK JO KABI AHAY NA THAY
NAA ANAY KI KASAAM TOOR KAR AHAY

PARDAH NASHINI KI HOOSH NA RAHAY
KHULAY BAAL AOR NA KUCH O-HAR KAR AHAY

HAATH MAI AUNGLEE PAKAR OPHIE MAIREE
WO GHAR TAAK CHOOR KAR A-HAY.

Its need LOTS OF improvement which I would after my ACCA exams…



Edited by - sajjad_dar2000 on Dec 09 2004 121256 AM

[sajjad_dar2000]

DIL KI BUS-TEE MAI AIK BUS-TEE HAI
JO ROOZ UJARTEE HAI ROOZ BUSTE HAI
TAIRE TASVEER KO DIL MAI RUKHTA HON
LOOG KEHTAY HAIN YE BUTT PARASTI HAI

[KJK]

Woh to Khushboo Hai Hawaon main bikher jaaye ga
Masla Phool ka hai phool kidher jaaye ga

[Huma]

BHAI aap logon nay BAIT BAZI KI MUT MAR di hay )...though i am happy that you guys like poetry..

i do not write poetry myself.. so can we plzzzzzz carry on with bait bazi..

here you go with the shair...

INSAN KI KHAHISHON KI KOI INTEHA NAHI
DO GAZ ZAMIN BHI CHAHIYE DO GAZ KAFAN KAY BAAD... (NN)

So plz come up with the shair starting with D... plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

take care
HUMA

[sajjad_dar2000]

NA KAR SHIKWAA KISMAAT PAR
KUCH APNAY KARTOOT B TO DAIKH
SARDI UGGAR BAHOOT LAGI HAI TO
AAG BULL RAHI HAI AUS KO SAIKH.

HEHEHEHE..YEH ABI ABI SOOCH KAR LIKAA HAI

[n/a5]

Dil ke dard ko dil torne waala kya jaane.
pyaar ke rivaj ko ye zamana kya jaane.
hoti hai kitni takleef kabar mein.
upper se phool chadane waala kya jaane'

( E )

HEART BEATS ( try try again )

[sajjad_dar2000]

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Dil ke dard ko dil torne waala kya jaane.
pyaar ke rivaj ko ye zamana kya jaane.
hoti hai kitni takleef kabar mein.
upper se phool chadane waala kya jaane'

( E )

HEART BEATS ( try try again )
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E sai Mangaa elc heater sanam sai
wo bola aag pai hath upnay saikh
elc. heater mangtaa hai, ja kar tum
shishay mai upna bootha to daikh

[Huma]

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Dil ke dard ko dil torne waala kya jaane.
pyaar ke rivaj ko ye zamana kya jaane.
hoti hai kitni takleef kabar mein.
upper se phool chadane waala kya jaane'

kya janain means N..

na gawao nawak-e-neem kash tan-e- raiza raiza luta diya
jo bachay hain sung samait lo tan-e-dagh dagh luta diya

A now..

[sajjad_dar2000]

aow k tum ko sunahain kani payaar ki
mangoo pani martaa hai pathar
kia baat hai mairee sohnay yaar ki

[sajjad_dar2000]

abi abi aik nahi AZAD guzal likhi hai bilyoon (cats) par mai nai, hope u all would like it. TO ARAAZ KIA HAI


DOOR KAHAIN BAHOONK RAHEE
THEI BILYAAN
KUTAAY TO WO HO NAHAY SAKATY
THEI WO BILYAAN
KUTOON JAISEE AWAAZ THEI B NAHI
THEI WO BILYAAN
BUCHAY NAHI THAI KHAIL RAHAY WO
THEI WO BILYAAN
BALAA HAATHI KI AWAAZ NIKALTO WO KAISAY
THEI WO BILYAAN
KUDD B UN KA THA CHOOTA KEYOON K
THEI WO BILYAAN
HAHOO HAOO NAHI MEYAHOON MEYAHOON KI AWAZ THI AA RAHI
THEI WO BILYAAN
AUB UN KO KON ROOKTA KON TOOKTAA
THEI WO BILYAAN
JAA KAR DAIKHA TAMASHA UN KA
THEI WO BILYAAN
AKHIR SOOCH JAA KAR DAIKH TO LOO
JAA KAR DAKHI TO NIKLEE WO BILYAAN
PHIR UPNAY AAP SAI POOCH WO 'KEYOON' JAWAB MILA
THEI WO BILYAAN

[n/a5]

A

Ajnabi rahon pe chalna mushkil tha,
Tum ne hath barha kar dil ko asra dilaya.
Phir mur ke youn chale gaye kyon?
Is kadar humay tum ne kyon bhulaya?


HEART BEATS ( try try again )

[ali4u3]

sajjad is tht ur own poetry...p

Never seek advice from a Chartered Accountant. They are trained to find problems not solutions.

[ophie]

Sajjad dar ........ that was hillarious ....... I told you that you wont believe it to be my poetry .... But it is ..... It was the time when I remembered thousands of shairs ....... but that was before start of my article ship ....... I forgot every thing afterwards except my studies ....... those were good old days man ..... now the only poetry that I listen to is Rap songs ....... <img src=icon_smile_evil.gif border=0 align=middle><img src=icon_smile_evil.gif border=0 align=middle><img src=icon_smile_evil.gif border=0 align=middle><img src=icon_smile_evil.gif border=0 align=middle><img src=icon_smile_evil.gif border=0 align=middle><img src=icon_smile_evil.gif border=0 align=middle><img src=icon_smile_evil.gif border=0 align=middle>

I think huma bibi is the one who has started the thread ...... so here is a tribute for you mR. sAJJAD dAR

"DO HI TO BAA-ZOQ AADMI HEIN FAQAT
MEIN HUA YAA MERA RAQEEB HUA" (Ustad Abdul Hameed Adam)

[maani]

"Log kehte hai ke jub pyaar hota hai
to neend urh jaati hai.
Kaash koi hume bhi pyaar karlay
hume neend boht aati hai"

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